Sunday, October 4, 2009

Results

I got my results back for my essay "Belief and the Existence of God"

I am happy with how it came out. My tutor said that my focus was good for the huge topic that I attempted to do in just 2000 words.
She said my referencing was good...Stan :)
and said that I pulled it together really well after how my draft turned out (which was not so good).

But yes my main failure was that I tried to fit too many topics in and she said that it needed to be tighter, which would come about if I kept it to a smaller portion of the topic :(
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  1. ExPatMattOctober 6, 2009 at 7:46 AM

    Congratulations on your results, Daniel.

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  2. zilchOctober 6, 2009 at 11:32 AM

    Covering less of a topic in more depth is almost always good advice. Take care of the sense, and the sounds will take care of themselves.

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  3. Daniel (Da Pilgrim)October 7, 2009 at 2:47 PM

    Thanks guys.

    I've been quite busy lately if my replies/posts are a bit few and far between.

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