Sunday, October 4, 2009


I got my results back for my essay "Belief and the Existence of God"

I am happy with how it came out. My tutor said that my focus was good for the huge topic that I attempted to do in just 2000 words.
She said my referencing was good...Stan :)
and said that I pulled it together really well after how my draft turned out (which was not so good).

But yes my main failure was that I tried to fit too many topics in and she said that it needed to be tighter, which would come about if I kept it to a smaller portion of the topic :(


  1. Congratulations on your results, Daniel.

  2. Covering less of a topic in more depth is almost always good advice. Take care of the sense, and the sounds will take care of themselves.

  3. Thanks guys.

    I've been quite busy lately if my replies/posts are a bit few and far between.